Project: The Return
Current Words: 5383
Words to Go: 94,016

With the writers group tomorrow I finished editing and adding to chapter 2. I rewrote an entire section as a dream sequence that the main character is having. I wasn’t originally going to do that. My original idea was to have two story lines going on a switching from one story to the other each chapter, but I decided against it and decided to bring the second story to the main character. I think it works better, and allows that the story doesn’t get complicated and lets the reader keep track of one story line instead of two.